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標題: [已解決]Oral EXAM,,,幫我'係咁已'CHECK下文法, THX!!
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[已解決]Oral EXAM,,,幫我'係咁已'CHECK下文法, THX!!

Oral EXAM,,,幫我'係咁已'CHECK下文法, THX!!\
同咪睇下貼唔貼題,,,THX!!\
錯野揾紅色間住post番出黎,,,thx!


題目:my favourite people
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Good afternoon.Today i want to introduce my favourite people.My favourite people is YUKI.,She is also my best friend. According to me.she is very special and important. Because she is the first friend of me in the primary school.and when i stay with her,i can forget all the vexation .Yuki is beautiful.Many people like her very much.She has the big eyes, long hair and her skin is as white as the snow,Sometimes i call her snowwhite.I like Yuki because she is kind and helpful.She always suppot me and tell me 'never give up'.If i do everything wrong,she will tell me the reason and help me to do it correctly again . She doesn't look like the selfish people,If you ask her for help,she never say 'no'.2 year ago, My pet Don Don died, she told me don't be sad, Don Don was not really die, it just went to another world.She is honest too, she never tell lie to everyone.Alought we study in the different secondary school,Our friendship will never be lower.THANK YOU!



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