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發表於 2007-5-13 08:05 PM  資料  短消息  加為好友 
Good afternoon.
Today i want to introduce my favourite person.
My favourite people is YUKI.
She is my best friend and she is very special and important to me because she is my first friend in the primary school..
When i stay with her,i can forget all the vexation .
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Yuki is beautiful.Many people like her very much.She has the big eyes, long hair and her skin is as white as the snow,Sometimes i call her snowwhite.I like Yuki because she is kind and helpful.She always support me and tell me 'never give up'.

If i do everything wrong,she will tell me the reason and help me to do it correctly again.
She doesn't look like the selfish people,If you ask her for help,she never say 'no'.2 year ago, My pet Don Don died. she told me don't be sad, Don Don was not really die, it just went to another world.
She is honest too, she never tell lie to everyone.Althoughwe study in the different secondary school,Our friendship will never be lower.THANK YOU!


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